loud neighbors synopsis

Wednesday, June 18, 2003

Story Idea: 2 men in a restaurant in Hawaii overlooking the ocean. They’re there from S.F. and L.A. on some electronics conference. The narrator, a loud and obnoxious middle manager is talking about business travel. It all culminated in the pregnant lady—no lap child lady story. Not sure how it ends, but hit by a bus would be nice. A restaurant patron that sat behind the pair may say something on his way out—perhaps something the reader will hopefully be thinking the whole time.

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